Crying doves and walking dogs—6 am
The Sun slows down on a dusty day
Tied by a string to the horizon.
As I pass by the forest land empty streets
a dove despairs
And wails ooh hoo hoo. A peacock soothes
And shrieks, ‘wait wait’ while
Tiny birds consternated in leafy trees
Chirp ‘yes, aye, that’s right, see see’
Some whistle in joy a passing gull
Agrees.
The mandir pandit as usual is singing
On the mike out of tune and dolefully
To a very patient sherawalli*
Three ladies march like cadets in the park
Breathing breathless home truths and esoteric
Recipes kids shout my turn my turn in street cricket
And the garden hose washing cars snipping hedges
And cooing babies a girl discusses her home
Work sitting on a gate step on her mobile phone
Panditji fades away blissfully into the distance
Whirring air conditioners tell me I’m home.
The title actually should be Crapping Dogs.
The opening line would/could/should be
Colonel Kaul takes his dog for its morning call.
*Sherawalli is Goddess Durga riding twelve armed on her sher (lion). Sherawalli is the one with the lion.
My mistake seems to be a tiger and eight arms. Here’s one with a lion and ten arms :-
chandleur 
Tiny birds consternate[d] in leafy trees. Did you mean constellate in trees? I hope you did because “Tiny birds constellate in trees” filled my mind’s eye with a joyful image of tiny birds filling the tree like little stars. This phrase “Three ladies march like cadets in the park…” is divine, I can see them walking, three abreast, in matching coats. Oh, your imagery is fabulous. The children calling out “My turn! My turn!” far away in the distance, in my imagination. This is the stuff great poems are made of. I could feel the air and smell the water hitting the dusty earth. This is good with a capital G.
Thankfully,
Ginene
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Thank you! Thank you!
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ohh yeah .. the weather is amazing & early morning in chd and mohali …
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Fabulous!
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Thank you !
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for your generous comment, thank you!
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Thanks a lot. love your response!
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Oh, I love these! How many symbols we have here! Your poem is so full of wit and has such a cheerful tone to it.
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Brilliant!
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I’m so grateful!
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